Either this book is MUCH cleaner than I thought it’d be, or I’ve lost my ability to spot shitty sentences. It doesn’t help that it’s first person and Joey’s voice is very much sarcastic, don’t-give-a-fuck teenager and things I’d normally nuke are just how she talks. And I don’t know if that’s a good thing or a bad thing on my part.
At any rate, I’m down to find-and-replace editing for typos, and of course the Evil Word List. All of my “felts” and “heards” have gone DOWN man.